I now remember downloading it for the teacher, Tara, but looking around shows she won't have any scene anytime soon or ever be considered a main LI. Guess I'll skip this game then, thanks.
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I’m glad ya liked the dialogue, but calling me a good writer is lowkey outrageous with how bad the pacing and progression is with most of the LIs.
Should’ve left the death scene in just for youMore like Tako Mid since not enough Alyssa scenes.
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The Lakers would have been swept if you did that.Should’ve left the death scene in just for you
It would be better if there weren't two major paths, music and sports.
All the focus on one meaty major path is better than being spread thin.
Don't like some LIs being exclusive to one major path.
I personally think that the basketball side of things feels more natural to the story.
The writing loses my interest at times, and feels a bit long-winded without relevant substance.
The lack of progress with most of the LIs has been disappointing.
The first 2-3 chapters had my attention.
The past two were hard for me to finish.
I wish that the writing would have less cringe "wacky moments" and be more straight to the point.
Game still has potential and is a valid effort.
Just some constructive criticism. Keep up the promising work developer.
All the focus on one meaty major path is better than being spread thin.
Don't like some LIs being exclusive to one major path.
I personally think that the basketball side of things feels more natural to the story.
The writing loses my interest at times, and feels a bit long-winded without relevant substance.
The lack of progress with most of the LIs has been disappointing.
The first 2-3 chapters had my attention.
The past two were hard for me to finish.
I wish that the writing would have less cringe "wacky moments" and be more straight to the point.
Game still has potential and is a valid effort.
Just some constructive criticism. Keep up the promising work developer.
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just wondering was there anything added? as i loaded up my last save and it didnt add anything as it went through the park dialog with june and then went to the thanks for playing scene.
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Yeah, this game is too realistic
Do not worry though. There are games in modern setting without a boring gring. With a plot like "- Hey, beautiful, wanna fuck? - Sure, handsome! - ... - OMG that was so intense, please add me to your harem!"
Though there was quite a praised game, where MC could avoid "single choice" by a few inconspicious decisions earlier. But there was much more action-packed plot, not some "boring realistic academy".
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lmfao why am I imaging the Fallout 4 dialogue box and there being a dialogue option that says recruit / add to your harem. then of course it wouldn't be Fallout without Preston Garvey saying another settlement needs your helpYeah, this game is too realistic
Do not worry though. There are games with plot like "- hey, beautiful, wanna fuck? - sure, handsome! - ... - OMG that was so intense, please add me to your harem"
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This game is a poster child for outlining your story before writing. Quippy dialogue can only get you so far, and just because the story is slice of life doesn't mean that it can be directionless. Even if all you have are just vignettes, they still have to contain something more in terms of writing other than "characters went to a place and did a thing". Good example of that is a scene with Jordan in this recent episode where there's a hint of us possibly learning something about her and it's failed spectacularly for a gag that doesn't even land. The best way I can describe the story of the game is meandering and unsure of itself.
From the technical standpoint, I think it's very well done though, music is non-offensive, renders are good, models are fine (except for the childhood friend that has a face that someone probably sat on when she was a baby) and you have a good sense of directing a scene with camera angles and animations.
I really hope the writing will get better, as there's a lot of potential here.
From the technical standpoint, I think it's very well done though, music is non-offensive, renders are good, models are fine (except for the childhood friend that has a face that someone probably sat on when she was a baby) and you have a good sense of directing a scene with camera angles and animations.
I really hope the writing will get better, as there's a lot of potential here.
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I just finished Chapter 5 on Steam and I have to say it was the best release yet. It had the perfect mix of fun moments with some serious ones and great character development.
I have 2 saves and on Sports path I cannot see myself going forward without having Paige as a LI, she was so great there, I liked that MC's loyality was also being put to test by temptations.
On the other save with Music path I went with Alyssa and I also enjoyed this one so much. I love how she slowly warms up and starts opening more, some people might think it's too slow but to me it's going to be even more satisfying and rewarding later. Honestly these moments where they just bonded and later hug and teased each other are better than quick lewd gratification.
I'm really surprised how different these 2 paths, like not just dialogue variations and same places like most VNs but total new areas and interactions with chracters that are otherwise not interactable in other path. I hope the dev can continue this way without overwhelming himself because it must be an immense work to basically work on 2 different games considering how different Sports and Music paths are, but I can only wish good luck and hope he pulls it off.
Overall I loved this update and I cannot wait to see how Tako develops this lovely project going forward.
I have 2 saves and on Sports path I cannot see myself going forward without having Paige as a LI, she was so great there, I liked that MC's loyality was also being put to test by temptations.
On the other save with Music path I went with Alyssa and I also enjoyed this one so much. I love how she slowly warms up and starts opening more, some people might think it's too slow but to me it's going to be even more satisfying and rewarding later. Honestly these moments where they just bonded and later hug and teased each other are better than quick lewd gratification.
I'm really surprised how different these 2 paths, like not just dialogue variations and same places like most VNs but total new areas and interactions with chracters that are otherwise not interactable in other path. I hope the dev can continue this way without overwhelming himself because it must be an immense work to basically work on 2 different games considering how different Sports and Music paths are, but I can only wish good luck and hope he pulls it off.
Overall I loved this update and I cannot wait to see how Tako develops this lovely project going forward.
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Ikr? I can't believe I have to larp as an arts nerd hippie just to get with the objectively 100% certified best girl.Shoulda mention this, I am still salty about Jordan not being on sports path. What did I do to you Tako, why are you so cruel to me?
Loved the update. Anybody know how to unlock the "side girls" lewd scene below?
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I did it on the sports path and not in a relationship Paige
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Which one is Jordan again I just recall the redhead was the best girl for me last I played but I don't recall anything about this game so I need to give a replayShoulda mention this, I am still salty about Jordan not being on sports path. What did I do to you Tako, why are you so cruel to me?
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Shoulda mention this, I am still salty about Jordan not being on sports path. What did I do to you Tako, why are you so cruel to me?
But the best girl is on sports path
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